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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2018 2:19 am 
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This series should literally be made as a interactive spin off game made by R* and Telltale...

Why not metaphorically?

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2018 4:08 am 
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Gooby wrote:
xxCSPROxx wrote:
This series should literally be made as a interactive spin off game made by R* and Telltale...

Why not metaphorically?

I just come up with basic chapter plot, then write in the rest. Glad for the positive feedback though figured everyone would hate on it and stuff.

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2018 4:55 am 
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Carcer City Hood wrote:
Gooby wrote:
xxCSPROxx wrote:
This series should literally be made as a interactive spin off game made by R* and Telltale...

Why not metaphorically?

I just come up with basic chapter plot, then write in the rest. Glad for the positive feedback though figured everyone would hate on it and stuff.

What do you mean?

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2018 7:57 am 
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Carcer City Hood wrote:
Gooby wrote:
xxCSPROxx wrote:
This series should literally be made as a interactive spin off game made by R* and Telltale...

Why not metaphorically?

I just come up with basic chapter plot, then write in the rest. Glad for the positive feedback though figured everyone would hate on it and stuff.

What do you mean?

Well i wrote the first chapter basically outta the blue, just a idea i had in my head for a week or so, you know seeing most of us as characters in the game but after it and incorporating members likeness into them. Take Gooby he's a racist, porn addict so i visualized him as a Skinz member. I figured that as soon as that first chapter was read everyone was gonna be like "what the fuck is this garbage!" Or "why the hell did you put me in here? Take me out of it!" Was surprised as hell when you guys asked for more chapters or to actually be in it.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 05, 2018 9:20 am 
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Next chapter should be up tomorrow sometime. We're gonna get those fucking tvs and VCR's so Deagle the smiley can watch the porn!

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2018 2:31 am 
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Carcer City Hood wrote:
Take Gooby he's a racist, porn addict so i visualized him as a Skinz member. I figured that as soon as that first chapter was read everyone was gonna be like "what the fuck is this garbage!" Or "why the hell did you put me in here? Take me out of it!" Was surprised as hell when you guys asked for more chapters or to actually be in it.

Racist, yeah. Porn addict? Not really, i consider myself borderline asexual, i mostly post porn gifs out of boredom or just out of appreciation for the actress' looks. Your stories are still fun to read, nonetheless, and you can visualize me as whatever you want, man.

Though i suggest you space out your story posts' grammar after a few sentences so they're easier to read and grasp, y'know, you typed all the past stories in one long pile of text which may look unappealing to some.

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2018 5:15 am 
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I was only going by what people post, i mean you post a lot of porn pics so i just figured you liked porn alot. Ill try to space shit in the future chapters.

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Gooby wrote:
xxCSPROxx wrote:
This series should literally be made as a interactive spin off game made by R* and Telltale...

Why not metaphorically?

So, you could interact with the characters a whole lot more...

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2018 7:28 am 
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xxCSPROxx wrote:
Gooby wrote:
xxCSPROxx wrote:
This series should literally be made as a interactive spin off game made by R* and Telltale...

Why not metaphorically?

So, you could interact with the characters a whole lot more...

What the fuck?

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2018 7:36 am 
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Gooby wrote:
xxCSPROxx wrote:
Gooby wrote:
xxCSPROxx wrote:
This series should literally be made as a interactive spin off game made by R* and Telltale...

Why not metaphorically?

So, you could interact with the characters a whole lot more...

What the fuck?

Did I say something wrong? If so,please tell...I'm not really good at English,so...sorry if I did...(I can understand English though,but sometimes I'm having problems with words that I'm not very familiar with...)

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2018 6:59 am 
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C.Pro felt like shit walking out of the CCPD office. "Another shitty day in a city full of corrupt cops and psychotic criminals" he thought. Walking up to his squad car he noticed a note in the window. "Oink oink pig meet behind the Sprunk factory now, H" Knowing he had no choice he got in his car and floored it towards the big broken green bottle sign downtown.

Hood sat against the wall blackjack at his side, he was waiting on the cop to show. He needed to call in a little favor for tonight and hoped the cop could deliver. Screeching tires made him look up and see C. Pro getting out of his car. "I got your message what the fuck do you want?" Hood glared at him "Look fuckface I've done a few things for you now you gonna do a little something for me" C.Pro looked at him realized he had to at least hear Hood out. "What do you need?" He asked simply. Hood nodded pleased that the cop knew who was in control. "I need a van or a truck tonight" C.Pro looked shocked "And how the fuck am i supposed to get that?" Hood laughed slightly "Don't you got a police impound lot? As corrupt as you CCPD fucks are i wouldn't be surprised if you had a tank in the lot!" C.Pro in his mind was pissed "How the fuck does he know we have a impounded tank!?" He thought. "Look Hood I'll try to get you something i won't ask what's its for but I'll park it back here if i can get one, now get the fuck outta here" Hood smirked at him and walked off towards the apartment building.

Arriving at the building he rounded up Gooby, Mac and Deagle. "Alright guys i think we're on for tonight i got us something to move the tv's and VCR'S with" Mac nodded at Hood "Yeah alright man and i scoped out the place while you were gone they are still there." Gooby pulled down his hockey mask "Lets go i been looking at those tape cases all day just waiting!" Hood shook his head "Not yet it's still light out and we have wait to give the cop time to get wheels" Deagle started humping goobys leg "Porn Porn! Headjuice!! He yelled. Gooby shoved him "get the fuck off me!" Deagle immediately ran up the stairs to his room.

Around dusk Hood, Gooby, Mac and Deagle got ready to go. "Why the fuck do we got to bring him for?" Gooby complained. "He needs exercise and plus we need him, Omelette and Mr Jay are taking care of the weapons from last night and Rel is off dealing as usual" Hood shut him up. "Ok ok" Gooby muttered. Walking towards the abandoned Sprunk factory Mac was chattering about how he knew the tv's would work. Upon reaching the factory they all quickly ran around back to the parking lot. At the far end was a beaten up dark red Gang Burrito van. Hood reached the drivers door. There he found a note "I had to steal this fucking thing outta the impound lot! Don't think about bringing it back to me asshole!" Hood laughed "Yo we got us a free fucking van guys!" "Everyone get in, Mac you get shotgun!" Everyone climbed in and following Mac's directions they headed for the Tv's and VCR'S.

Hood pulled up on the curb on a abandoned residential street. "This will do" Mac said getting out "We don't want to alert them" Hood angrily grabbed him the neck raising his blackjack. "Alert who asshole!? What the fuck are we getting into!?" Gooby ran over and pulled Hood off Mac "Let him explain man" Mac rubbed his throat. "It's some Babyfaces they got a child porn ring going in there" he pointed to a shithole house up the street. "I figured we kill them take thier stuff and its a win-win" Hood looked at him sternly "How many guys?. Mac looked at Hood "3 or 4 guys, i heard about it awhile back" Hood nodded as he'd kill a pedophile for free. "Sorry i roughed you up but next time fucking tell the exact fucking details! Carcer ain't a city where you get to make a mistake." Mac nodded in approval. Gooby started walking towards the house "lets go motherfuckers i got Sasha Gray porn waiting on me!" The four of them began sneeking towards the house.

They reached the house just in time to see a fat fuck Babyface walk out the front door he was alone. "Deagle sic em boy!" Hood ordered. (Deagle began once again humping Goobys leg) "Not him Deagle, him" Hood pointed at the Babyface. "You took my damn shoes!" Deagle roared running full steam at the Babyface. "What the fuck!" the Babyface screamed as Deagle chopped at face peeling skin and splintering bone with his cleaver. After he quit moving Hood restrained Deagle. "Man that was.... intense some attack dog" Mac said in awe. "He's still annoying" Gooby shrugged. Making their way to the inside of the house they heard very very wrong noises coming from a room. Looking in Hood saw 3 Babyfaces while trying not to look at the tv's screens. "Gooby, Deagle and me will jump them, Mac you look around for more guys." They all agreed to the plan. Weapons out they snuck up behind them, Deagle was able to kill his quickly with a throat chop but the other two pounced on Hood and Gooby. One had a hatchet and was swiping away at Gooby and was cutting his arms a bit while Gooby faught him off with his bat until Mac came running in and buried his sickle in the Babyfaces eye. The Babyface screamed and fell out the boarded up front window. Gooby pissed off at his bleeding arms ran out with his metal bat to finish his fucking ass. Bringing the bat up around his neck Gooby pulled until his neck snapped. Back inside Hood, Mac and Deagle triple team executioned the last one. Hood cracked his skull open with his blackjack, while Deagle sliced his chest open pulling his guts out and finally Mac ripped his balls out with his sickle. The Babyface dropped more dead then even possible. They won the tv's and VCR's and stopped a child porn ring but no one would ever know.

Mac had been right there was enough tv's and VCR's for everyone and then some. They took every single one in the house and there was alot of them. Loading the van up they then headed home. Everyone in good moods, even Gooby with his arms all bandaged up was bragging about all the porn they had stashed at the apartment. The van cruised the night streets of Carcer City rolling over broken glass, boards and used condoms. Hood behind the wheel, Mac asleep in passenger seat, Gooby trying to explain to Deagle that his leg was not a humping post. Hood was lost in thought, His life was not great, close to the gutter actually. He was stuck in the worst, violent, morally depraved city in the country. But it was his life, he had friends, now he had a van and he had porn waiting at home. Pulling up to the apartment building he looked up at a flicking street light. "This is Carcer City with no rules and my life with little meaning but i wouldn't change it for nothing" He thought before going inside to hook up the tv's and VCR'S so everyone could separately watch thier porn of choice.

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Read all these a few days ago, I enjoy the read and you are pretty good at them keep it up. Glad to see a new one.

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Pretty good fanfic once again CCH. Needs more rape and bullying Deagle though.

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Gooby wrote:
Pretty good fanfic once again CCH. Needs more rape and bullying Deagle though.


raping and bullying* :wink:

Good one CCH.

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Pretty good fanfic once again CCH. Needs more rape and bullying Deagle though.


raping and bullying* :wink:

Good one CCH.

Ugh... who would want to stick their meat up Deag's arse?

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