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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2018 1:21 pm 
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Thanks guys, raping and bullying alright i can work that in. I added the van simply to give the characters greater access to Carcer, it won't be used all the time as i think fuel would be difficult to come by. Does anyone have any other suggestions or anything for me? Im open to ideas and suggestions. Oh and we need a clown gang member still so Sweet Tooth congulations if you stick around you'll be a apartment building member eventually once i learn more about you.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2018 1:39 pm 
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Mmm.. my horrible health irl atm could make a good plot twist. Maybe in your story i get AIDS from a local Russian whore which leads me getting steadily more worse and worse as the plot goes on and IF i die irl today or soon, you may then kill me off the story for good.

Lying in my blood and vomit covered deathbed as i type.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2018 1:46 pm 
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Mmm.. my horrible health irl atm could make a good plot twist. Maybe in your story i get AIDS from a local Russian whore which leads me getting steadily more worse and worse as the plot goes on and IF i die irl today or soon, you may then kill me off the story for good.

Lying in my blood and vomit covered deathbed as i type.

Well i don't plan on killing any of us off at the moment i get its Carcer City but everyone is vital to the story but i could write in a rape bit were we kidnap some Russian whores lock them in the apartment building have Deagle fuck one to death using his cleaver as a dildo or something. I've personally never considered myself a decent writer, never really tryed writing a continuing story in my life except this fan fic. I do read a lot which helps a bit im sure.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2018 2:31 pm 
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Thanks guys, raping and bullying alright i can work that in. I added the van simply to give the characters greater access to Carcer, it won't be used all the time as i think fuel would be difficult to come by. Does anyone have any other suggestions or anything for me? Im open to ideas and suggestions. Oh and we need a clown gang member still so Sweet Tooth congulations if you stick around you'll be a apartment building member eventually once i learn more about you.
It would be interesting to have a chapter where they encounter Piggsy... :) I'm sure it would be a pretty fun chapter...I can only imagine the gang beating up Piggsy to a bloody pulp... :twisted: or if the story takes place after the events of Manhunt it would be cool if one of them gets too meet Cash...

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2018 9:16 pm 
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Thanks guys, raping and bullying alright i can work that in. I added the van simply to give the characters greater access to Carcer, it won't be used all the time as i think fuel would be difficult to come by. Does anyone have any other suggestions or anything for me? Im open to ideas and suggestions. Oh and we need a clown gang member still so Sweet Tooth congulations if you stick around you'll be a apartment building member eventually once i learn more about you.
It would be interesting to have a chapter where they encounter Piggsy... :) I'm sure it would be a pretty fun chapter...I can only imagine the gang beating up Piggsy to a bloody pulp... :twisted: or if the story takes place after the events of Manhunt it would be cool if one of them gets too meet Cash...

Well it takes place after the events of Manhunt, Hood mentions the night it took place in chapter one and Omelette mentions how Piggesy and Cash killed most of the Cerberus members. I probably won't add Cash in person but ill drop some references to him maybe on the news channels, graffiti or something. If i can work he might make a one night appearance but bringing Cash into the apartment would be just too weird for me to write.

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Thanks guys, raping and bullying alright i can work that in. I added the van simply to give the characters greater access to Carcer, it won't be used all the time as i think fuel would be difficult to come by. Does anyone have any other suggestions or anything for me? Im open to ideas and suggestions. Oh and we need a clown gang member still so Sweet Tooth congulations if you stick around you'll be a apartment building member eventually once i learn more about you.
It would be interesting to have a chapter where they encounter Piggsy... :) I'm sure it would be a pretty fun chapter...I can only imagine the gang beating up Piggsy to a bloody pulp... :twisted: or if the story takes place after the events of Manhunt it would be cool if one of them gets too meet Cash...

Well it takes place after the events of Manhunt, Hood mentions the night it took place in chapter one and Omelette mentions how Piggesy and Cash killed most of the Cerberus members. I probably won't add Cash in person but ill drop some references to him maybe on the news channels, graffiti or something. If i can work he might make a one night appearance but bringing Cash into the apartment would be just too weird for me to write.
I didn't notice that...(how could I :() well,maybe have a character who is similar to Piggsy?

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Carcer City Hood wrote:
Thanks guys, raping and bullying alright i can work that in. I added the van simply to give the characters greater access to Carcer, it won't be used all the time as i think fuel would be difficult to come by. Does anyone have any other suggestions or anything for me? Im open to ideas and suggestions. Oh and we need a clown gang member still so Sweet Tooth congulations if you stick around you'll be a apartment building member eventually once i learn more about you.

Sounds good to me man, I ain't planning to go anywhere anytime soon. I'm sure you will learn some things gradually. If you ever want to know anything just ask :)

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Well i don't plan on killing any of us off at the moment i get its Carcer City but everyone is vital to the story but i could write in a rape bit were we kidnap some Russian whores lock them in the apartment building have Deagle fuck one to death using his cleaver as a dildo or something. I've personally never considered myself a decent writer, never really tryed writing a continuing story in my life except this fan fic. I do read a lot which helps a bit im sure.

Well, apparently i didn't die today so you can continue including me in your stories for all i care.

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 11, 2018 8:46 am 
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Hood walked out of the apartment. Everyone else was watching porn tapes or whatever other tapes they managed to find. He passed Rel on the sidewalk who stopped for a second, "Hey man i got a tv and VCR hooked up in your room, enjoy." Hood told him. Rel nodded "Thanks man been awhile since i had one." Hood chuckled "See ya later buddy" and he kept walking. Hood walked slowly reflecting on the past few weeks, all the new friends he had, the new van. A bunch shit went through his mind. As he turned a corner he heard a tin can being kicked ahead, he reached for his blackjack. Crouching behind a burnt out car he saw a figure under a dirty street light.

Hood not knowing if it was a CCPD officer or worse grabbed a glass bottle and chucked it against a nearby building. The figure turned around looking in the noises direction. "If your CCPD or my ex-wife your fucking dead!" He yelled. Hood being neither of those people decided to show himself. He stood up and walked out into middle of the street, he took ten steps towards the guy but when he seen his face he wished he hadn't cause the man was wearing a clown mask...


Hood had heard some fucked up stories about The Clowns he raised his blackjack ready to fight this fucker to the death! The clown seen Hood with his blackjack and advanced on him quickly. "Hey man you want some ice cream?, i got chocolate, strawberry, blueberry chip, all type of flavors." Hood stood dumbfounded for second "No! I don't want any fucking ice cream! What the fuck is your deal?!" The clown laughed "Just figured if i offered you ice cream you wouldn't fuck me up or something." "Im glad you didn't want any ice cream though, more for me to fuck." Hood was in disbelief thinking he heard him wrong. "What did you say you wanted the ice cream for?" The Clown smiled slightly "You heard me right, i fuck ice cream!" To prove his point he pulled out a carton of chocolate ice cream stuck his dick in it and began going to town on it. Hood sighed "Jesus" he thought "i always find the fucking weirdos." Hood looked at the fucking Clown. "What the fuck is your name? Ice Cream or some shit?" The Clown smiled no my name "Sweet Tooth, motherfucker" Hood laughed in disbelief "Sweet Tooth the ice cream fucker goddamn and i thought Deagle is weird." Sweet Tooth was about to ask who that was when they were blinded by CCPD squad car lights! "This is the CCPD stop right there motherfuckers!"


"Run!" Hood yelled as him and Sweet Tooth bolted down the street. "This way man follow me!" Sweet Tooth yelled. Hood followed him down a alley towards a stairway. The CCPD cars were right behind them! Sweet Tooth opened the door at the top of the stairs and they ran into a room. "How many are out there?" Sweet Tooth asked. "I dunno man 3-4 tops id say, wish my gang was here we'd fuck them up big time!" Hood replied smirking. "Most of The Hoods are wiped out though so what the fuck are you talking about!?" Sweet Tooth yelled over the cops pounding on the door. "I'll tell you later!" Hood shouted as the pigs broke down the door. It was 2 to 3. "Fair enough" Sweet Tooth said pulling out a knife. Hood made his move and started bashing one cop with his blackjack, not really doing much damage until he cracked in the cops eye, making the pigs eye hang out and shit, half blind the cop couldn't really fight as Hood killed him with a blow to the base of his skull after hitting him square in the balls. Sweet Tooth was busy stabbing the other cop to death, slit his throat and then threw his body down the stairs into the dirty alleyway. "Where's the other one there were 3?..... He asked. They heard a car start and fastly drive away.


"Fuck Fuck Fuck!" Sweet Tooth yelled "They know where i live now and they'll be back to get me and my ice cream, all my girls..." Hood sympathized with the freak looking at this shithole full of dirty freezers and not much else. "Relax man my name is Hood and i got a better place then this dump, i got your back and my gang will too, Fuck the CCPD!" Sweet Tooth the demented ice cream fucker laughed. "Exactly what gang? Most known gangs including The Hoods are gone, history." Hood nodded "Im part of a ragtag mixed bag of gang members, we're all different but we're badass together, your one of us now motherfucker get your shit together." Sweet Tooth jumped up and ran to a big freezer. "Just let me grab some of my favorite girls, hmm strawberry definitely, maybe some Rocky Road to rock my world tonight? definitely lemon-lime for a morning quicky!" He gently put all the cartons he wanted in a trashbag and swung it over his shoulder. "Ready to go man?" Hood asked a little disturbed. "Yeah lets get the fuck outta here!" They walked off back to the apartment building, melting ice cream making the air smell a little better then the shit you usually smelled during a Carcer City night.

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Glad to finally be in one of your stories, keep them coming I always enjoy reading them. :)

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Hood woke up to the sounds of rough housing somewhere in the apartment building. Opening up his door he nearly got knocked over by Deagle being shoved down the hallway. Hood looked down the hall and saw Sweet Tooth standing there breathing heavy. "What the fuck are you guys doing!? You woke me up!" Hood yelled. "Just playing around Hood sorry for waking you" Sweet Tooth admitted pulling Deagle back to his feet. Hood was surprised at this turn of events. The Smileys and The Clowns were brutal enemies who hated each other. "Anything is possible in Carcer City" Hood thought. "Alright guys just next time take it outside" Hood smiled. Sweet Tooth looked at Deagle. "Go do something buddy i gotta talk with Hood just stay the fuck outta my ice cream." Deagle did as he was told and ran down the stairs. "I gotta go get something from my ex-girlfrinds place tonight" Sweet Tooth told Hood. "So whats that got to do with me?" Hood asked. "Well i might need some backup if Carl is there." Sweet Tooth replied. "Alright ill get one of the guys and we'll go with you" Hood told him. "Alright thanks" Sweet Tooth answered.

Later that night Hood, Sweet Tooth and Mr Jay got ready to go. Hood had Mr Jay get a spaz 12 gauge shotgun from Omelettes stash just in case. Out on the street Hood told Sweet Tooth to lead the way. Walking and talking Sweet Tooth told them how the bitch dumped him for Carl after she caught fucking a bucket of ice cream. "That dumb bitch left me with nothing!" Sweet Tooth told them. "What a cunt!" Mr Jay replied. "Yeah i had to move into that shithole Hood found me in". Sweet Tooth complained. After walking a bit Sweet Tooth told them they were almost there. Mr Jay pumped his shotgun. They came up to a familiar building..... "You gotta be shitting me!" Mr Jay yelled. They were standing back outside the building of the woman he banged a couple weeks ago and the midget with the porn star mustache!! "Whats the problem?" Sweet Tooth asked. "Nothing man..." Mr Jay replied. "Well lets go then" Sweet Tooth said kicking open the front door. All three went inside and up some stairs. Sweet Tooth went up to a apartment door and started pounding on the door. "Bitch im here for my shit! Open up!" The door swung open. Standing there in the doorway was the same woman who Mr Jay fucked. "Sweet Tooth what the fuck are you doing here!? I threw your ass out you ice cream fucking freak!" She yelled "Im here for my shit and ive brought some friends if you or that fucking half sized man child Carl trys stopping me!" The cunt looked at them all. "You guys again!? What the fuck are you doing with him?" Sweet Tooth looked at the others "What does she mean again!?" Mr Jay spoke up first "We been here before, i kinda fucked her brains out a couple weeks ago before we knew you" Sweet Tooth went calm, clenched his knife and Hood stepped in between him and Jay. The bitch look at Sweet Tooth and smiled real bitch like. "I also married Carl!" "You cunt!" Sweet Tooth turned around and knocked the bitch down. "Where the fuck are you Carl!? Im gonna kill you fucker!!" Sweet Tooth began tearing the place apart. "Was Carl a midget?" Hood yelled at him. "Yeah why?" Sweet Tooth asked. "Cause im pretty sure he's dead, i chopped off his tongue, put a babyface mask on him and left him in front of the CCPD station to be raped." Sweet Tooth stopped and started laughing uncontrollably. "That's so fucking great man!" The bitch went nuts "Fuck you guys, you assholes got him killed! I'll fucking..." Mr Jay knocked the bitch out with the spaz 12 gauge. Sweet Tooth looked at the silenced bitch. "I haven't even begun my payback on this cunt, Hood hold her for me." Hood slung her over his shoulder. Sweet Tooth finally found what he was looking for... a bunch of ice making and mixing supplies. "Im gonna make a bunch of new combinations of "girls" who will please me far more then that cunt ever could!" He explained pleased with himself.

As they walked back to the apartment building Mr Jay was kinda quiet. Sweet Tooth finally spoke to him "We're all good man, she was fucking a midget who used to be my best friend so i could care less if you fucked her" Mr Jay smiled relieved he didn't have to worry about Sweet Tooth killing him or something "Alright man thanks for not holding the grudge against me" Hood was glad too, "Why am i lugging this bitch around still? Sweet Tooth laughed wickedly "This bitch is gonna be our rape bitch, she deserves it and so much more and we're gonna make her pay dearly!" "Alright!" Mr Jay yelled. "We can keep her in the basement" Hood said "Goobys gonna enjoy this piece of ass!" They all walked back home with this stupid cunt still unconscious.

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Finally was able to read all of these. Well done, CCH!
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Finally was able to read all of these. Well done, CCH!
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 04, 2018 9:17 pm 
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Thanks for all the positive feedback, im still not sure where i got The Clown fucking ice cream from, my mind is just hilariously dark and fucked up.

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